A New Collection Analysis: Linked Tales of Suffering

Young Freya is visiting her distracted mother in Cornwall when she comes across teenage twins. "The only thing better than knowing a secret," they inform her, "comes from possessing one of your own." In the time that come after, they violate her, then entomb her breathing, combination of unease and irritation darting across their faces as they finally release her from her temporary coffin.

This could have served as the shocking centrepiece of a novel, but it's merely a single of multiple terrible events in The Elements, which assembles four novelettes – released distinctly between 2023 and 2025 – in which characters negotiate past trauma and try to achieve peace in the current moment.

Debated Context and Thematic Exploration

The book's publication has been clouded by the presence of Earth, the subsequent novella, on the preliminary list for a notable LGBTQ+ writing prize. In August, nearly all other contenders withdrew in dissent at the author's debated views – and this year's prize has now been terminated.

Discussion of gender identity issues is missing from The Elements, although the author addresses plenty of significant issues. Anti-gay prejudice, the impact of conventional and digital platforms, family disregard and sexual violence are all examined.

Four Accounts of Pain

  • In Water, a grieving woman named Willow moves to a remote Irish island after her husband is incarcerated for awful crimes.
  • In Earth, Evan is a soccer player on legal proceedings as an participant to rape.
  • In Fire, the adult Freya juggles retaliation with her work as a doctor.
  • In Air, a dad travels to a burial with his young son, and considers how much to disclose about his family's background.
Suffering is piled on trauma as damaged survivors seem fated to encounter each other repeatedly for forever

Interconnected Narratives

Relationships multiply. We originally see Evan as a boy trying to leave the island of Water. His trial's jury contains the Freya who shows up again in Fire. Aaron, the father from Air, works with Freya and has a child with Willow's daughter. Minor characters from one account resurface in cottages, taverns or courtrooms in another.

These storylines may sound complicated, but the author knows how to drive a narrative – his prior popular Holocaust drama has sold many copies, and he has been translated into dozens languages. His businesslike prose sparkles with suspenseful hooks: "ultimately, a doctor in the burns unit should understand more than to experiment with fire"; "the first thing I do when I come to the island is change my name".

Character Development and Storytelling Strength

Characters are drawn in concise, powerful lines: the empathetic Nigerian priest, the disturbed pub landlord, the daughter at struggle with her mother. Some scenes echo with sad power or observational humour: a boy is punched by his father after urinating at a football match; a prejudiced island mother and her Dublin-raised neighbour trade jabs over cups of watery tea.

The author's talent of bringing you wholeheartedly into each narrative gives the comeback of a character or plot strand from an earlier story a genuine frisson, for the first few times at least. Yet the aggregate effect of it all is numbing, and at times nearly comic: pain is layered with trauma, coincidence on coincidence in a grim farce in which hurt survivors seem fated to bump into each other continuously for all time.

Conceptual Depth and Final Evaluation

If this sounds different from life and closer to uncertainty, that is element of the author's message. These damaged people are weighed down by the crimes they have suffered, stuck in routines of thought and behavior that stir and descend and may in turn hurt others. The author has talked about the effect of his individual experiences of mistreatment and he depicts with compassion the way his characters traverse this dangerous landscape, extending for solutions – isolation, frigid water immersion, resolution or invigorating honesty – that might bring illumination.

The book's "basic" structure isn't particularly informative, while the rapid pace means the examination of sexual politics or social media is mostly shallow. But while The Elements is a flawed work, it's also a completely readable, survivor-centered saga: a appreciated rebuttal to the usual preoccupation on authorities and offenders. The author illustrates how pain can run through lives and generations, and how years and compassion can silence its echoes.

Susan Brown
Susan Brown

A mindfulness coach and writer passionate about helping others unlock their potential through daily practices and self-reflection.